What a wonderful poem! You should show this to the man who inspired it; I think he would really like to see what an inspiration he is. The shape you used is creating, and adds to the enjoyment of the poem. Thanks for sharing!
that was really really cool. i take it that thats your dance teacher, and i felt the same way about my instructers when i danced, but that seems so long ago. anyway, i really liked the background and the flow or feel to it. good job.
That was very enjoyable to read. I agreee with Mr. Johnson, you should show it to the man who inspired it. This really shows how passionate you are about dance, and it is constructed greatly. You combined creativity, with your amazing writing skills to make a beautiful picture.
Thank you, i'm glad i could show how much i enjoy dance, but i think if i show this to my dance teacher he will take it the wrong way, he is only 18 :p
This really is a great piece and it shows how much you love and are passionate about dance. I kind of agree with both you and Mr. Johnson and Alyssa; if you showed this to your dance teacher he would most definately be flattered, but he also might take it the wrong way :). I think that this piece is very strong and shows your creativity skills.
What a wonderful poem! You should show this to the man who inspired it; I think he would really like to see what an inspiration he is. The shape you used is creating, and adds to the enjoyment of the poem. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletethat was really really cool. i take it that thats your dance teacher, and i felt the same way about my instructers when i danced, but that seems so long ago. anyway, i really liked the background and the flow or feel to it. good job.
ReplyDeleteThat was very enjoyable to read. I agreee with Mr. Johnson, you should show it to the man who inspired it. This really shows how passionate you are about dance, and it is constructed greatly. You combined creativity, with your amazing writing skills to make a beautiful picture.
ReplyDeleteThank you, i'm glad i could show how much i enjoy dance, but i think if i show this to my dance teacher he will take it the wrong way, he is only 18 :p
ReplyDeleteThis really is a great piece and it shows how much you love and are passionate about dance. I kind of agree with both you and Mr. Johnson and Alyssa; if you showed this to your dance teacher he would most definately be flattered, but he also might take it the wrong way :). I think that this piece is very strong and shows your creativity skills.
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