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Friday, October 22, 2010

Ocean of Gold

Author's Note: This poem was originally a stream of consciousness, and started out with the word Field. I immediately thought of a sports field, and made a face. I tried to think of some other kind of field I would enjoy writing about, and imagined a wide open field, filled with tall grass, like in one of those super-dramatic perfume commercials. I wanted to give it a really personal feel, and I hope I accomplished that. Enjoy!


Whoosh-
The wind blows across the tall grass
Tickling my face
                      My ears
                              My fingertips;
My world has become an ocean of gold,
With the blue sky above.

I walk through the path
             My path
Thinking about nothing in particular
Because the sweet smell of earth fills my senses.
I brush my palms across the grass,
And it feels like I'm somewhere far from here.

I look back,
Seeing only light footprints of where I have stepped,
Looking forward-to where I will go
It is comforting, knowing I am not taking anything from here,
for this place is complete.
 
A green space opens up in front of me,
begging me to run through it
And down the hill like only a child knows how.
I give in,
and soon, my feet are taking me
faster
         faster,
until I fly down,
the wind rushing past me,
and a smile on my face.

when I finally find the will to stop,
                  I fall
and stare at the sky above,
   The endless sky-
which seems so full of possibilities, stares back,
until it seems to swallow me whole,
to a place only to be described as heaven.